Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
recreational activities such as paintings and music, according to some individuals, should not be funded by government, instead of this, higher authorities should spend more money on other public facilities.I am in accord with this idea, however, I also believe these recreations should not be completely neglected.
To begin with, Lack of health facilities is the grave concern nowadays, so, the government should provide monetary support to build medical hospitals infrastructure as well as to introduce new diagnostic equipments to advance the treatment. In addition to it, If a government spend money on research to find out treatment of various diseases then it will improve the peoples life. Research conducted, as an instance, to find out the treatment of HIV, consumed heavy bucks, but safe many patients life. Hans government aid in medical field
Furthermore, building factories in the nation is fruitful to raise the economy and to lessen the unemployment among natives, if government invest fortune in the manufacturers to develop local business, then it will deliver benefits to both government and people. Apart from that, action to tackle the problem of global warming is imperative so rather than spending money on music and art government should spend money provide fiscal al assistance to promote pollution free transportation and campaigns regarding awareness of environment among people.
However, portrait sculptures and music are cannot be overlooked because both are mandatory to provide knowledge and keep the alive tradition, soothe and relax mind as well.
To conclude, Services like medical facilities, development of industries is the dire need of one nation, where as recreational activities are also important for culture and entertainment. Government should provide fund to raise other facilities and some help to aid recreations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, as to, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62105263158 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04076337794 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2254167971 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.0 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1111111111 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251005817159 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912230524432 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873747602415 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122241206918 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898519732449 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.