Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.
It has been observed through recent survey that, there is a significant increase in the crime ratio of adolescents in all urban areas across the globe. The main reasons for such outcomes are development of a consumerist society and increase in the poverty caused by unemployment. In this essay, I shall describe causes and also outline the ways to solve this problem.
Firstly, increased number of advertisements and celebrity endorsements has developed consumerist culture. Therefore nowadays, people tend to buy goods impulsively because of which they suffer from financial crises additionally they lost importance of saving money which ultimately results into increase theft, suicide, etc. For instance, in Ahmedabad, police have caught gang of 20 thefts and unfortunately it was sixth incident in a year.
Second main reason is increase in unemployment, which ultimately leads to poverty. Hence, sometimes youngsters turn to crime to establish their needs. Many people left without job because, they are unemployable due to insufficient skill and knowledge. For example, resent study showed that there are 45% young people not employed in India, among them 70% are unemployable.
To overcome this issue firstly, government should put some restrictions on frequency and exaggeration of advertisements and should conduct awareness programs on the importance of investment and saving of money. Secondly, there is extreme need to change in education system to level up children's growth. Thirdly, youth should develop their own abilities to survive in competition and also should use the electronic media for development of themselves and country instead of, using for crime and wastage of time.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that there are many reasons of increase in crime among youth like, increasing in purchasing trend and unemployment due to poor education but on the other hand, there are various solutions like controlling advertisements, stimulating good education and wise of electronic devices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54692556634 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05249882571 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4795887957 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110520972422 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363753877571 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204165066596 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587853039814 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277572070949 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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