The proposal proposes that in order to mitigate the penury, affluent nation should provide some different kinds of help other than monetary help. I tend to agree with the proposal. In this essay I will try to highlight my viewpoints and provide sound reasoning for my claims.
First and foremost, job opportunities can eliminate poverty. In other words, if rich nation provides different kinds of job aspects such as business and technical, people from poor countries can be benefited and it will mitigate the poverty, which is a mammoth problem for third world nations. For instance, middle east countries such as Dubai and Oman, provide job opportunities to many people from south asia which help them to sustain in the competitive world. Thus, scope of job can be more helpful as compare to financial aids.
Secondly, medical facilities are important in order to help. There are some ubiquitous problems such as AIDS or Cancer, which cannot be easily eliminated without powerful medical treatements. Hence, developed nation should provide medical aids. Moreover, poor nation cannot afford those higher cost medical treatements. So, rich nations should provide medical amenities to eliminate some health hassles. For example, India provides Polio treatment medicines to South Africa because almost 30% of children are affected by this rampant problem.
Finally, only financial help cannot solve the penury. To be precise, elected officials need to invest the money, which is supplied from some developed nation, in different modes such as defence or developing the trasportation. Despite of financial aids, poverty cannot be solved because it is a short time solution. Therefore, poor nation needs different mode of help from affluent nations, instead of monetary help.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion that, although money can buy anything, when it comes to solving the poverty, there are some more important things such as job opportunities and medical amenities which can eliminate or help to mitigate this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36956521739 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64578229636 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6209693511 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160981722884 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553371713579 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334215834902 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899489490135 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306612175446 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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