Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as poor countries need the workers more.
Do you agree or disagree?
Economically rich nations prefer to outsource their work to skilled workers of poorer nations to increase their profit margin. Even though developing nations require their people to help them develop as a nation, allowing other countries to appoint their workforce is felt as a greater benefit to the host in terms of economic and educational advancement. This essay shall analyse how employment by foreign companies is beneficial for the overall growth of developing nation.
Firstly, when developed empire outsources their work, the demand for labour increased in underdeveloped states, which leads to other advancements such as education. For example, by the late twentieth century, the influx of software related work from the United States to the Indian market consequently resulted in equal growth in the Indian tech-related educational institutions. This example clearly demonstrates the positive impact of foreign labour concept. This means, if poorer nations make their skilled labour available for hire to the world, they also develop their national infrastructure, educational colleges for instance.
Secondly, this trend of working in international companies would increase the economy graph of the poor nation. Let us take the above example of the United States offering a great deal of employment to Indian labour. Majority of candidates working in these institutions, would keep their earned income in Indian banks or invest in host country only, this would boost the overall economy of poor sates. As per recent report submitted by XYZ, a major chunk of money in the Indian banks is contributed by the employees working in foreign corporates.
As far as the requirement of a workforce by poor country is a concern, there are masses which are unemployed and need to put on work. Therefore, the government should work in transforming unskilled masses to skilled, by providing better education and job opportunities. This would solve the issue of both skilled and unskilled population while enjoying the above-discussed benefits at the same time.
To conclude, meeting the demand of foreign projects would be beneficial for developing countries overall growth in the field of learning and finances, without any detrimental effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50432276657 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95798830124 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556195965418 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1095167427 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148538080638 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534040411581 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428249667074 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831189096385 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304099803024 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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