Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes
Home, a safe place for living, is a fundamental need of every human being and safety is an important issue that should get utmost importance. Housing quality and its safety are thus two great concerns and whether the government or individuals should be accountable for ensuring strict building code is controversial. I personally believe that both the government and people should be responsible for the safety criteria.With the world economic crisis in 2007, there were many commercial frauds in constructing houses due to the increasing prices of the building materials like cement and steel. The owners began to build their houses with low-quality materials and at the same time, they constructed more floors than permitted to secure big profits. Hence the government must take strict actions against those owners who did not comply with safety standards as people avoid their roles in many cases. The government also have to build inspection authorities to the factories that manufacture building material to guarantee the standard and safety measurements. On the other hand, the constructing companies must oblige with the legal standards. Otherwise, their activity license should be cancelled or they should be forced to pay a big monetary fine. At the same time, people should be aware of the quality before buying or renting an apartment. More rigid steps should be followed while building a house. Unsafe houses are great threats for them and they would ultimately be the victim in case safety standards are not maintained while constructing any building. In conclusion, the government has a greater role of ensuring home safety standards. Besides individuals should also abide by the safety rules and codes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... be responsible for the safety criteria.With the world economic crisis in 2007, ther...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s than permitted to secure big profits. Hence the government must take strict actions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29304029304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80668796806 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4117365773 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412072452018 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137244705634 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759649370505 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.412072452018 0.151304729494 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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