Science advanced so much that It can now make it possible for people to live 100 years or even 200. some people think it is a good thing, other think that it is a bad thing. discuss both views and give your opinion
One of the major contributions of science is in the field of medicine. Consequently, this has resulted in better health and longer life. This achievement has positive consequences as well as negative. I strongly believe that it has resulted in some serious threats in our society.
Medical science has increased life expectancy from past couple of decades. People are healthier and fitter than ever and in addition to this, latest amenities are keeping people fit. Hence, Older generation are capable to work for longer years than before. First and foremost, this will keep them busy, and they will feel that they are making major contribution in society. secondly, they can support themselves financially and also would not be dependent on someone physically. However, with time cognitive skill and analytical skill of human beings deteriorate, they are not fast on making decision and scared to take risk. They are prone fall behind. In this new era of advanced technology, aged people don’t learn and fall behind
On the other hand, this has also posed some serious threats. There are only limited vacations in offices. if older generation will work after 60, younger generation would not be hired by companies and corporation. This in turn increases stress, anxiety and depression. Companies will suffer too as youngsters are more energetic, have innovative and creative ideas. In addition to this, they are open to new learning and has hands-on experience of latest technologies. The world has changed, and technology is changing the way of business, either service or products. If you want to be at cutting edge ahead of others, you are forced to adapt to new ways.
In conclusion, I think science achievement in respect of longer life span should be appreciated as this is major step forward. However, Increased life span will deprive new generation of their rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75275930601 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4953065048 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893273448673 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232007778432 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317999322875 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505127120472 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326202120409 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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