Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Many great discoveries are achieved both by private funding reasearches as well by goverment support. The sorce where scientist will be supported is importiant as goverments intrests are prophet driven. On the other hand private companies do not have as much resorces and connections. Nevertheless, I am certain that reasearch should be done without goverment help.
In order to make new scientific brakethroughs in different areas of our modern world it is vital to obtain money flow to cover the expenses. therefore, goverment funded projected are ammoung of the most importiand achivements of humankind. For examle, apollo moonlanding in 1969 was possible thank to goverment deep pockets. that illustrates how coverment can sucessfuly consentrate resorces and connections whihin scientist to achieave great goals.
On the other hand we can bennefit more on the projects with are leaded by private companies. Those kind of reasearches will bring together sharp minded individual, who are driven by positive inpact not by profit. A good example is Elon Mask funded company Tesla. Cars witch drive by elecrticity will be much better way to have less inpact for world climate change. Next big project is Space X witch allow people to travel to outerspace. that illustrates the power of private companies.
To conclude, witch solution will suit better from coverment and pivat funding reasearch we can clearly see that private compnyes can do as good job or eaven better than goverments. goverments are often driven by profit and greed, therefore i fermly belive in power of private companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85698305372 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8117018564 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123065795664 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407118597334 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384369258936 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757834158956 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428150296776 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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