Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that governments should conduct scientific studies instead of companies. While some individuals are in favour of this view, I agree that not only governments but businesses need to be in charge of carrying out these studies.
On the one hand, it is obvious that conducting the research including both basic and practical scientific studies should be responsible for governments. This is because the governments of different countries can easily collaborate with each other, they may be able to conduct studies on a large scale, which require a large investment. For instance, the active collaboration strategy between the UK and the EU is to deal with climate change, infectious diseases and this will help scientists across countries can resolve these complex global issues. Another reason for this is that governments often tend to pay attention to research areas that can benefit society as a whole. Studies related to environmental issues and crime rates are great examples.
On the other hand, we cannot deny that enterprises play such a vital role in conducting practical scientific research. Firstly, the result of these researches will generate profits and also it is the top priority of each company, which will encourage enterprises to make an effort to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. For example, a company, like Teva has been carrying out extensive research to solve the generic drug problem to provide them for patients, resulting in a decrease in the cost of out-of-pocket patients. Secondly, when private companies take part in investing in research fields, the constraint of finance on government’s budget will be relieved. As a result, it helps government have more cash to spend on other main areas such as infrastructure,health and medical services. These activities will improve/boost the standard of people’s living.
In conclusion,I strongly believe that both governments and businesses are duty of involving in these scientific researches
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43769968051 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15755827164 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2623949193 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23876840646 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852236856361 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672162023745 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165678086337 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069879287235 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.