Nowadays, buying things such as clothes or a gadget has become so easy due to its easy availability at super malls and online stores. Shopping has become one of the most common form of activity that is practiced by teenagers across the globe. A possible reason for the shoppers to carry out such activity is either they are bored or stressed. However it has both it's advantages and disadvantages, i believe the positive side outweighs the negative side.
To begin with, a lot of young people consider fashion as a status symbol, they want to copy the latest trend and buy clothes accordingly. This has resulted in developing of many mega malls in big cities. For instance, teenagers often idealizes actors as a fashion icon, they want to follow them and try to pick up the clothing style that they had in their latest movies. One of the up side to this is, due to high demand of outfits, more stores and malls are being built, which helps to bring in employment and the tax paid towards these clothing can be used by the government to benefit the general public in terms of health, education and transportation.
As said earlier, shopping often results due to boredom or stress faced due to study or work. To overcome such situation, people are more likely to go for window shopping. This might result in buying stuff that are non essential, resulting into financial crisis. A research conducted by economic times shows that 47% of women tend to spend a lot on clothing and accessories when in stress, which puts them in debt.
In conclusion, the benefits that a shopping center brings to a city, such as employment and tax money is undeniable, however, managing the financial part along with it is of utmost importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...y is either they are bored or stressed. However it has both its advantages and disadvan...
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Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... both its advantages and disadvantages, i believe the positive side outweighs the...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...e used by the government to benefit the general public in terms of health, education and trans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74750830565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60734486786 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5479322262 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156543791152 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551005763186 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566083716962 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076766890734 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465636770517 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.