Most of the people opt to go for shopping in their spare time. There can be multifarious reasons behind this phenomenon. One of these reasons can be the influence of advertisements. From my perspective, although it has some drawbacks, it is advantageous for the individuals as it keeps people aware about latest products.
The first and foremost reason why the people prefer shopping is that the advertisements are ubiquitous in this day and age. The distinct products are promoted by the renowned celebrities and these are presented in such a way that these catches the attention of the masses due to which people desire to purchase these objects as these are recommended by their favorite role model. In a recent survey, in most of indian house people use the Dabur Red paste as it becomes popular due to advertisements. Thus it manifests that promotion and recommendation of a particular thing has a profound impact on people's mind and it has ability to their alter their choices.
Shopping is beneficial for the people because they remain updated about various new trends like new techonologies which are coming in the market. Window shopping make people aware about different fashions, dresses, gadgets like tablet, mobile phones. Purchasing these things gives people feeling of joy and pleasure. For instance, some people are fond of decorating their house. Therefore, they look for the materials which they can use to decorate their house. However, shopping has some downside as well some times spend money lavishly due to which their budget of house gets disturbed and they are unable to buy necessities.
To sum up, it is evident from the aforementioned discussion that advertisements are the prominent reason for increasing the trend of shopping and despite some adverse effects it is proved to be beneficial for the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88526682082 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8590028986 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112668949997 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465241898072 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393614479681 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773495973473 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248227454501 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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