The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the housing crisis is escalating in the large urban centres around the world. There is an opinion that the solution to this issue is possible only at the governmental level, otherwise, the result will be disastrous. I completely agree with the notion and believe that authorities should take immediate action.
First, the situation around the accommodation market is getting worse day after day. On one hand, real-estate prices are going through the roof and supply cannot satisfy demand. Regular citizens are not able to purchase such an expensive place for living. That is why authorities should imply new measures tackling the issue such as social housing for low-income groups, low-percentage mortgages and subsidies for household construction.
Otherwise, if the issue is not solved by the actions of the government the consequences will be terrible because millions of people will be living in unbearable and unsanitary conditions. It will bring the spreading of different diseases and pandemics. Unfortunately, the initiative of individual citizens will not be effective as measures implemented by the government due to the scale of the problem. Only authorities have the possibility to allocate a significant amount of money from
the municipal budget to the social construction.
In conclusion, I totally agree that without government actions the issue of housing deficiency will lead to an enormous falling standard of living among citizens all over the world. As a result, millions of people will be forced to live in slums with all the negative consequences such as various diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45418326693 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03583043144 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.291860596 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118762326956 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390496297205 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350994980492 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604839020055 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044395336394 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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