Should government or teachers be responsible for what is to be taught in schools?
Education plays a pivotal role in people's life and it becomes paramount to provide the right education to children. It has been a topic of hot debate whether the curriculum of school ought to be decided by the bureaucrats or the teachers. In my opinion, I deem that it should be the government's responsibility as they can take adept actions all across the globe.
One of the prominent reasons why such a decision should be in the hands of the government is because they can take a universal step. In other words, a government can take the right action for the whole nation, and this way all children can have an equal level of education. For example, in a large country like India, it becomes very arduous to maintain the education level and during such times if the government takes responsibility, it can be a boon not only for the children but also the society as a whole.
Another major merit of having the government take the decision about the school subject is that they can stay updated with the latest norms of the world. Whereas, if teachers would have taken this responsibility, they would work with diligence but continue teaching the same things which will create a void in a child's life. When the government takes such a decision, they can change the syllabus according to future projections and what is beneficial for the children. To illustrate, the Indian government recently passed a law that language programming such as Python and JAVA should be taught to primary children because it is currently in vogue.
In recapitulation, having the government take the responsibility of deciding on the curriculum would ensure that there is no discrimination among the people and they learn what's best for their future. I deem that all governments around the globe should take a keen interest in school and try to broaden children's horizons as they are the future of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83692307692 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80768177026 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3231174122 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335192315949 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125297583308 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685921949503 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210615184215 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165506972827 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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