Smacking children is the best form of discipline? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some people think that beating children is by far an excellent way to teach them. I believe that such a method is preposterous and leaves a deep impact on the young minds.
In my opinion, inflicting pain to young ones is utterly the wrong way to address a child’s behavior for several reasons. Firstly, children, in their formative years, are innocent and delicate and know no conscience, hence, they must be dealt with care and affection. Secondly, parents, under stress, often turn reactive to the minor demeanors of their little ones, might let loose their wrath upon them. such parents then end up feeling guilty for their crimes, over their offsprings, when their conscience awakens. Thus, it is a morally incorrect way to educate kids.
Meanwhile, corporal punishment leaves a great impact on juveniles. Firstly, children generally try to replicate the behavior of their guardians. Showing such a violent attitude might make them perform the same on their bullying peers. This also results, overall, a negative trend of aggressive behavior among each other. secondly, such pain generally results in reactions from youngsters such as, lowering self-esteem, demonizing one’s family, or having a great fear of punishment, which can have severe consequences. For instance, in worst-case scenarios, some tend to commit suicide just to escape from punishment. Therefore, bashing has justifiable repercussions for minors.
In conclusion, I believe that it is an entirely erroneous belief that hitting young ones is a better way of controlling them, it definitely has its deficits in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38188976378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85780402304 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677165354331 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2324575493 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0246757803578 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00950133554719 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193405055991 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0163915108816 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012569706393 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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