In modern times,the issue of smoking in public places has become highly controversial.There are those who say that smoking in public areas should be banned, however others believe that it should not. In this essay I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking,there are two main reasons why people believe that governments and municipalities should be forbid smoking in public places,such as hospital, restaurants and train stations. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because cigarettes smoke is carcinogenic for the people who breath it. A good illustration of this is that people who smock a lot and secondly smokers can develop serious illnesses such as lung cancer. A further point in favour of banning smoking in public places in that the smock from cigarettes smells terrible. If we stand next to someone who is smoking,your clothes and hair will smell like tobacco smock for he rest of the day.
Despite these arguments,there is also a case for the idea that smoking in public places should be allowed. The main reason why people think that is a good idea is because it could negative affect on some businesses,such as bar, restaurants and nightclubs. As a result, many people could lose their jobs. Secondly,the government could lose of tax money from cigarettes. This is because less people would buy cigarettes and so pay less tax on them.
In conclusion,this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. Despite arguments to the contrary,I fell very strongly that we should in all public places . If the government implement this policy,we will have a healthier and clear society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04659498208 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94833055495 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7916918208 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204428348454 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647919386185 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817400014137 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124739413288 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705946012368 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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