Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
With the inception of technology, an incredible change has occurred in the life style of individuals as they prefer to make relations online. Due to this, social websites has become attractive and they post their sensitive personal data online. In the same context, many people claim that it can be risky as such websites are prime target for hackers and they can leak information while many other opine this. Pros and cons of social media platforms should be scrutinised before forming any opinion.
Admittedly, with the help of social media websites such as Twitter, Facebook etcetera we can connect to any people sitting in any part of world. These websites not only help to form bond between people but on many occasions, establishments has used them to aware people about crisis or to inform about new strategies. To substantiate it, Indian Government started Swach Bharat Abhivan also known as Cleanliness mission and they use Twitter to promote it all around the country. Eventheless, such websites has promoted freedom of speech as they allow to publish their views online.
however, many nasty comments can also be seen on posts which disgrace human race. This has also resulted into depression and suicides in many cases. Apart from that, such websites can be hacked and all the data on their servers are leaked online. For illustration, 1.6 million Yahoo accounts were hacked and many affected people lost plethora of money and many blackmailing cases were also reported. Moreover, many terrorists have also use these platform to influence others and successfully made people to join their organisation.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that social media is like a beautiful rose with some thrones. People should use these websites as they are fruitful and creators should continue to make them more secure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'publishing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: publishing
...romoted freedom of speech as they allow to publish their views online. however, many na...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...allow to publish their views online. however, many nasty comments can also be seen o...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...ed. Moreover, many terrorists have also use these platform to influence others and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57176765842 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8589948924 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154829988475 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589238711933 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664001320454 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109037749954 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477792358142 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.