Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Education being the third eye of human beings set the foundation of a successful career for them. In order to achieve great heights of success, people complete tertiary education after schooling as they believe that graduation make them eligible and help to crack the interview. However, many others reckon this and claim that profits offered by higher education are much wider for societies as well as for individuals. Both the notions are valid, hence, both are scrutinised before reforming any opinion.
Admittedly, various governmental run and private organisations are looking for ideal candidates which can help them to grow as a company and their profits may get an increment. For the sake of better employers, formers have set job criteria and university education is their primary requirement. For illustration, NBCC, a semi-government construction company, demands Civil Engineering degree if anyone want to apply for their interviews and on many instances, they demands masters degree. Hence, it is irrefutable to say tertiary education is key for employment.
However, it is undeniable that in the universities different group, race and religion of people collaborate together and help each other to complete their respective degrees. To substantiate it, In the final year of engineering, groups are made of five to six pupils to complete their projects. Therefore, this collaboration help to create one society with the foundation of trust and respect. Referring to individual's point, there character is developed as in universities they have to fulfil their tasks on their own and they become independent and responsible.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is evident that universities offer much larger profits to our societies and individuals in spite of only jobs. People should also focus on creating society safe despite being selfish about their employability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ands Civil Engineering degree if anyone want to apply for their interviews and on ma...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'demand'
Suggestion: demand
... interviews and on many instances, they demands masters degree. Hence, it is irrefutabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, third, well, as for, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47945205479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04638254539 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61301369863 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6586315836 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28686750292 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917182101953 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543856440054 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15838529669 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802677550908 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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