Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Post-secondary education becomes essentials for people who pursue a better lifestyle. Some people argue that higher education in university would lead to prosper jobs while others claim that there are much merits exist in university education including attain state-of-art knowledge, innovate solution for humans problem in diseases, air pollution, etc. in this essay, I discuss both merits of gaining higher education in details.
By emerging technology and job demand in the market, university education is essential for whom to looking for a decent job. Nowadays, when the jobs posted on the internet, companies looking for more people with a bachelor's degree or even in some cases, a master degree because these trends indicate that the market needs a knowledgeable person who could take the job and do it efficiently. For instance, Silicon Valley, where more advent software created only hire a developer which at least a bachelor's degree. So having a better chance to find a good job needs to have better credentials and education.
However, higher education makes it more possible for people to take a great job; it has different benefits either for society and individuals. First, most often, university education persuades some people to enhance their knowledge and take more steps and get their Ph.D. Thereby, in the research world, schools mostly dedicated to solving a crucial problem for humans. Nowadays, more advanced medicine created in the university labs in which help peoples around the world to cure their diseases. Second, university education also causes that people gain more knowledge. This means that more people in this journey find the unique talent that causes them to become a competent person in society.
All in all, higher education is not only helps people to enhance their skill-set for finding a secure job but also it has different merits for people like the development of knowledge, better lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, at least, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30420711974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67932240516 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.312154053 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287609531025 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115438996619 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581773393611 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188153130202 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735023659218 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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