Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, education is considered an important aspect for each person. Ability of learning and getting a higher degree in a specific filed will affect positively person's career. As a result these benefits will also show on society since when the majority of persons are well-educated automatically the society will be classified as civilized one
Staring with the good impact that education may have on people. Lots of people those days are aiming to reach a high level of education in their university to have a good position in the future. It is well-known, that when you advance in your knowledge in a special field, you will be considered for the position before other candidates. For instance, a person who get a PhD in pharmacology will have better opportunity to find a job than the one who has a bachelor degree only.
Moving on to the benefit that will reflect on society. A society where the majority of people are well-educated ,will be directly classified as civilized one. Furthermore , those types of people will help their local communities to grow since they are educated ,and at the same time they will decrease the number of unemployment due to the lack of degrees. In addition, the society will benefit from taxes also because most of the individuals are working so automatically the money income will increase .
In my opinion , each person should be educated enough not only to get a good job vacancy and advance in his career but also to help its society by increasing her incomes and decreasing the number of unemployment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95419847328 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82128410505 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.956632038 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173118795995 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752356669187 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312136761394 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108639836471 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279257772064 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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