Salary is fixed amount of money or compensation paid to an employee by an employer in return for work performed. There are some countries in which employees get huge remuneration. Some masses deem that this is effective for country whereas, others opine that government should manage wages and restrict the sum of money that people gain. This essay would delineate both views and my perspective in impending paragraphs.
There are some people who think that individuals who are highly skilled and talented should be rewarded by huge wages because it is a way for a country to express gratitude for a person's experience or expertise. Moreover, huge remuneration also an incentive for others to work harder in own country which is good way to deter skilled or talented people leaving a country. Thus, it can be said that high salaries are good for country as it is also a sign of country's wealth.
Notwithstanding, there are some people who believe that limiting huge wages would bring more equality in a country therefore government should ensure that wealth is evenly distributed throughout a country and it cannot heart other people. Moreover, limiting high pay mean more funding for public services which will benefit for all people in society. Therefore government should limiting huge salaries to keep prosperity and equilty in a country.
As far as my opinion is concerned, I ponder that government should give high pay to employees with proper justification because it is important to entice people to do more challenging or dangerous work as well as it enhance the confidence and skills of people when they do hard work for this. Also, it helps in growth of country from all aspects.
In the light of aforementioned points, it can be inferred that both groups hold their own justification for their opinion, yet I feel my point of view is more supportive for me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...or a country to express gratitude for a persons experience or expertise. Moreover, huge...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...will benefit for all people in society. Therefore government should limiting huge salarie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9619047619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79464989349 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7141407288 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342558824687 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123166684824 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591207068584 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190752108374 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538067263271 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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