Almost every person in this world must do work to make their living. They do many varieties of occupations from self-employment on his own business to work in a company as a full time or part time job. People do jobs in medical field, education field, construction field and many more to earn money. While, some people are lucky to get very high wages from these jobs, others may achieve only very low income. Persons who get high income get the opportunity to have better food, education and health, while others may lead poor living conditions. People in the society have mix feelings about these salary scales. Whereas, some people show that high salaries draw many benefits to the society, another group point out it is not.
High salaries are an important attractive to prevent brain drain from developing countries. People who migrate to developed countries with the intention of high salaries and living conditions are often professionals with expert knowledge in their fields with necessary experience. However, if they can stay without migration, they can contribute with their wisdom and skills to propel the country forward. Furthermore, young generation also get a chance to work with them and share their knowledge and experience and learn qualities such as dedication, determination and so on. Therefore larger salaries may help to avoid moving master brains to developed countries. These days a significant problem face by many Asian countries are larger number of medical professionals and computer experts moving to developed countries such as England and European Union for better salaries. Moreover, another advantage of high salaries is that, government may able to collect larger taxes from high earners and in turn use this money for public welfare.
Persons who oppose larger salaries say this can dishearten the larger number of persons in the society. While, smaller numbers of persons are enjoying benefits of surplus, larger number may struggle to even achieve their basic needs. This can lead to rich people remain more rich while poor remain poorer. As a result of unrest people may motivate to do riots. Many such movements have reported from some developing countries around the world recently. In addition, these job opportunities with high salaries are often offered with high end computers, phones, cars and many more which can lead to use occupants’ working hours in addition to standard office hours. They may work extra hours even during their home stay and less time to spend for personal and family life.
In conclusion, high paying jobs draw many benefits to the country and help to move forward and should be there for full utilization of brilliant minds. However, government should implement rules and regulations to make sure every person in the society get a salary to achieve their basic needs comfortably.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... own business to work in a company as a full time or part time job. People do jobs in med...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to work in a company as a full time or part time job. People do jobs in medical field, e...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...as dedication, determination and so on. Therefore larger salaries may help to avoid movin...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ain more rich while poor remain poorer. As a result of unrest people may motivate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18103448276 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60612659105 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2049702532 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.52173913 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1739130435 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217050938161 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067309292655 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457621656155 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136087409823 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043847317339 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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