In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems.

Stepping into marriage is moving to a new phase of life. Countries like India, marriages are arranged by their parents whereas other part of world people has liberty to choose their own life partner. I am more inclined with the former statement. Firstly, this essay will discuss the merits of arrange marriage. Secondly, this essay will discuss the advantages people choosing own marriage partner.

First and foremost, few countries follow their traditions and culture by generations. Also, they insist the next generation to follow the same. Arrange marriage is one of them in their heritage. People believe that these marriages will stay united for long time because it is done by following certain process like matching the horoscopes. Additionally, it has the possibilities to check the bride and bridegroom families by their parents to know the goodness before the marriages. To prove that, NGO had done surveys on marriages and the result shows that success rate is 80% higher in arranged marriages in India compare to non-arranged marriages.

On the other side, several people believe love marriage is the best form to find a life partner. Furthermore, it gives extra time to understand your partner likes and dislikes before the marriage. They get to know plethora of things about each other before their marriage. To exemplify, many celebrities date their partners before getting married, however there are cases immediately, they ask for separation after marriage. This system has both positive and negative impacts equally.

To sum up, some people like to follow their traditional way and some people like to choose on their own. According to me following the customs and marrying the life partner decided by our parents will bring happiness to our life

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
... discuss the advantages people choosing own marriage partner. First and foremost,...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ome people like to choose on their own. According to me following the customs and marrying the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22456140351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61340154809 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.145756847 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438836854299 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129483994715 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116996750611 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263124400554 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969304486022 0.056905535591 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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