In some countries more and more adults choose to continue to live with their parents after they graduate and have found jobs. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
Grown-ups are showing the tendency to stay with their parents or guardians even after completion of their education and having had to work for a company. However, it benefits both parents and their offsprings despite the burden for parents which is negligible. that is to say, the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin with, when a youngster working and living with parents he can take good care of them and support them in their older age. Thinking among adults has took a dramatic change since the past decade. Now, they are utilizing the advantage of their parent's love and care in getting a homemade lunch to have at their workplace rather than spending loads of money outside for unhealthy food. For instance, a study conducted on employees of Accenture among persons who stay with their parents that they can stay healthy and active whole day and happy even after reaching home and who doesn't stay feel every day as hectic and when they reach home they wish someone would be with them to share their emotions and chores.
Moreover, when parents feel that they need some space to spend along as they have their wishes to fulfill or places to visit as couples they may consider their kids to stay awake. But, this is always neglected by parents as nothing in the world would equal them as their offspring do. Mother and father always insist their kids should support them all the time when they wish. Meaning these all aspects are least scored when it comes into consideration and if a youngster is with his or her parents both experience the strength of togetherness. For example, A study revealed that parents who live along with their kids are the happiest.
In conclusion, although parents sometimes demand privacy a person could spend time at their friend's house. Sustaining our life with parents would fulfill our dreams and theirs too. There is no such parent who would ignore their kids. Hence the advantages far outweigh disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33338531167 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555223880597 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4805800483 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26706152178 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963658866239 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392453507425 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174474143253 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228206870649 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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