In some countries, people are possible to have a wide variety of foods have been transported all over the world. To what extent the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks.
With the advent of globalization, trading among countries around the globe develops significantly. Nowadays, it is easier for residents in one country to purchase commodities from other nations. However, even though this practice brings about a mixed bag of both boon and bane.
On the constructive part, society is blessed with numerous benefits because the wide diversity of foods from different countries is beneficial to consumers, and the presence of those imported foods is worth mentioning. To commence with, every kind of commodity is ubiquitous as local inhabitants have countless chances to choose what they want to buy. Moreover, people can buy all types of groceries such as vegetables and fruits at reasonable rates due to the exchange of goods among nations have become easy. Furthermore, there will be more employment opportunities because the demand for laborers is increasing rapidly as the transportations of trading goods have become more convenient and efficient.
On the destructive part, there appears to be a potential shortcoming from this trend. Chiefly, imported foods contain preservatives and chemicals which are harmful to human health. Besides, it does not has freshness as still, it takes long time to move commodities from one nation to another. Moreover, the quality of the imported food would not withstand the local fresh food.
To conclude, although there are sine drawbacks of buying foods which shipped from other countries in the world, I firmly believe that the merits of this development have outstripped the demerits, especially in counties where areas ifof agricultural is narrowed
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
... to human health. Besides, it does not has freshness as still, it takes long time ...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... to human health. Besides, it does not has freshness as still, it takes long time ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45849802372 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96037667982 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4047520294 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243957986769 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07155916018 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500778718407 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132607269416 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631399580682 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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