In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while in other countries, people prefer to buy their own house for living. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while in other countries, people prefer to buy their own house for living. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house

It is often a big decision to make when it comes to choosing a place to live in, and especially to decide whether to rent a house or to buy your property. Many people prefer to live in a rented apartment than owning a home, whereas others choose to do precisely the opposite. I contend that having ownership of a house has far more advantages than renting a house.

To start with, People who hold the view that renting a property has more advantages assume so for mainly for the following reasons. Firstly it is often seen that the prices of the houses are very high and it becomes impossible for some people to spend that much money. So these people save a great deal of money by renting a property. Secondly, living in someone else' house avoids them the hassle of looking after the maintenance and any unexpected expenditure on the property. Additionally, people who rent a home always have the freedom to move to any other place or city based on their work location or children's school.

On the opposite side, owning a house, even though the property prices are skyrocketing, is a one-off payment to invest in a home, and avoid the suffering of paying a rent every week. A house becomes a permanent asset, and with increasing cost, its sale value increases every year. Also, a home can be a stable source of income because a landlord has the freedom to rent his or her apartment.

Furthermore, people do not have to worry about the sudden unexpected evacuation notice and hunt down for another home. For example, we faced the situation of vacating a house three time until we bought our own house five years ago. Landlords can only enjoy this sense of freedom. Besides this, an owner of a home can construct or refurbish it in any way of his or her choice and can make as much as facilities as he or she wanted.

To conclude, there are some benefits to renting a place, but owning a home has much more freedom and long-term advantages which all tenants dream of enjoying one day in their future.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[4]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...perty. Secondly, living in someone else house avoids them the hassle of looking after...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s sale value increases every year. Also, a home can be a stable source of income ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56077348066 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50439161297 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2810212094 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388917192566 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120172849009 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079025347501 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203546018506 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102739561769 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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