in some countries people who have high incomes pay very high taxes what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country

Essay topics:

in some countries, people who have high incomes pay very high taxes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country?

Although this is an international role that all nations have to pay a part of their salaries to governments as a tax, paying taxes becomes a controversial issue in some countries, In which how much people have high incomes they have to pay more taxes. This role has both pros and cons for society and bodies, which I will explain.
When it comes to taxes, determining taxes based on people’s incomes causes that governments can keep balance in society and cut down the social status difference. So, this action makes a profound contribution to diminish the rate of crime and make a country a safe place for all inhabitants. Besides that, this money is considered as a government budget and used for optimizing society infrastructure such as transport systems, level of education, and so forth. For instance, if all humans pay with high salaries pay more taxes not only do they can satisfy all their desires in their personal life but also they will have a significant impact on making a country with high standards.
On the downside, most of the time, people who have high social status and incomes have worked hard to achieve this status like doctors. They withstood hard condition in order that they can see it gains in the future. As a result, provided that this flock of people has to pay more taxes, they may lose their interest to continue and achieve their aims, which evoke their dissatisfaction. In addition, masses are encouraged to rebel against governments and do some illegal actions. For example, people prefer to pay less to smugglers instead of paying high taxes, which will cut their profits.
In conclusion, this is well worth the effort that all governments do exact appraisals to set up the best tax roles which escalating advantages for both locals and individuals and cutbacks on drawbacks.

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Average: 5.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8996763754 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74131619222 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6735890981 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381427562148 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13189121913 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862724155752 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236294997694 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712630980191 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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