It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the idividual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
One of the controversial subjects in each society is related to the age of marriage. A flock of people holds that pupils had better marry before 30. Provided that governments can make proper infrastructures, this opinion leads to advantages for both society and members.
From a psychological point of view, getting married in younger ages, people have an opportunity to make better relations with their offspring. Because younger generations have more energy to spend with children, they can satisfy most of their physical needs in comparison with older parents. Furthermore, if parents have low age differences with children, they are able to achieve a better understanding about their emotional needs and desires, which make a profound contribution to strengthen family ties, which is beneficial for all family members. For instance, when parents are older than their child, it is possible that youth rebel against parents because parents beliefs are different and cannot consider all children’s decade needs.
Encouraging people to marry in younger age not only have benefits for individuals but also it causes some advantages for whole societies. From a social point of view, due to the fact that most of the times younger parents can make good relations with children and be their friends, they are able to supervise pupils actions in society and hinder them from doing street crime including vandalism, robbery. So, the rate of crime will be diminished. Besides that, getting married in younger age prevent some mental disorders in people such as depression and can escalate life expectancy in nations. All of these are responsible for immeasurable gains for all society.
In conclusion, in the case that governments can optimize infrastructure in various area like health condition, education, job opportunities and so forth, encouraging people to get married under 30 can be beneficial for both members and societies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37171052632 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93724581914 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2149978686 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250552560771 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947759951603 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660966373973 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16916733459 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543792732431 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.