In today’s world, people want a lavish lifestyle and to fulfill this dream and to achieve great heights, they spend more time in their offices than homes. Apart from that, the nature of various jobs requires workers to work at the odd hours, which may result in much lesser time with their families. As people usually are unable to stay in touch with their children, they develop many detrimental practices by the time they become teenagers. This essay will elaborate on the problems such young ones face and will produce a conclusion as per my understanding.
Firstly, when a child reaches to teen-age, they have to face multiple physical as well as mental changes. This is the time when they require guidance the most. With their parents busy in their offices, they face the dilemma of sharing their problems with anyone. Most of the time they confide their feelings to their friends who are as wiser as they are and provide unjust information that may lead to bigger adversities.
Next, on various occasions when a child is given unnecessary freedom without keeping an eye on them, they may get into the wrong hands and could also be addicted to harmful drugs such as Heroin or Cocaine. Further, when a child doesn’t find anyone to share their feelings or problems with, those issues get bigger with the time and might lead the child’s life towards a sinister destination.
Lastly, though the importance of the work cannot be lessened in any way and it is parents’ responsibility to provide for their families. However, they should manage their work and home life effectively to spend more time with their families and to complete daily chores. By doing this, parents can ensure that their children don’t feel left out and all alone.
To conclude, even though money is one of the most crucial aspects of life, parents should ensure, that it is not all that they are providing to their children. Talking to children about their problems and always being there for them, is equally significant. Real-time updates by teenagers to their parents prevent them from being foolish and reckless which eventually brings the best of them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97245179063 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51065922717 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5399786894 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135167874082 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535833927875 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346763032635 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835050391417 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552387337014 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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