Nowadays, the population of the world is increasing with an alarming rate and living space in the towns is decreasing very fast. Though people have started to live in multi-storey buildings most of us still like to live in our own homes with nature all around us. This has caused a big issue with the type of living areas and it is also threatening the existence of the countryside as people are ready to move in these areas with a fairytale in their minds.
I completely agree with the thought of preserving the countryside as people have a tendency to move to a new and beautiful place rather than living in multi-storey buildings and then they just destroy the place before they move to a new one.
Because of the increasing population and human's intervention in wildlife, many species are now endangered. Now that humans want more space to live in, life has become very difficult for wildlife animals as they don't know what other places they can go to apart from their jungles and with humans moving to the countryside will also have a bad impact on the environment.
In essence, people should think about controlling the growing population first and should manage to live in the current space they have instead of being a danger to the wildlife as well as to this planet. The earth doesn’t only belong to humans but to animals and birds as well and as I consider human species the most dangerous of all species, we should take a step back and think about other lives on this planet as well apart from only our own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e in the towns is decreasing very fast. Though people have started to live in multi-st...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he place before they move to a new one. Because of the increasing population and...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... difficult for wildlife animals as they dont know what other places they can go to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, apart from, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62637362637 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52946781146 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0440674827 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.875 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136735050869 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583161318438 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378634502955 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846398429283 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334470011345 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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