Some offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is generally seen that having realised from jail the criminals commit more crime. This essay will elaborate all the reasons behind this phenomenon and suggest some solutions to solve this problem.
First and foremost reason of committing more crime is that jails are the universities of the crime. The offenders who has got imprisonment due to minor crime are mixed with hard core criminals and learn the new moudus operandi of crime from them. The latest research has revealed that jails increase the tendency of committing crime by 30% of culprits . The second vivid reason is that after coming out of bars people do not accept them and also do not hire them as they have stigma of serving the pusishment in jail.. For instance one software engineering could not get job for two years as he has history of spending two years in jail. When they cannot get their livelihood then they often resort to unscrupulous activities.
There are many solutions which can be implemented to solve this problem. Firstly the hard core criminal should not be mixed with petty criminals. These criminals teach them the new method of crime and encourage them to commit more crime by telling criminal experiences. Secondly, instead of giving jail to minor criminals the vocational training should be provided so that they can start their own work even if the society does not accept them. The vocational training plays a significance role to rehabilitate the offenders as per the latest research . Thirdly ,there should be rigorous punishment even for small crime so that it can deter them from committing crime
In conclusion, there are plethora of reason to prove why criminals do more crime after serving sentence such as keeping together all type of criminal in jail and callous nature of society toward criminals. Vocational can be fruitful to solve this problem in large extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00319488818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55064301567 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5303514377 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0144785962 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309151039044 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11100698326 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821819032089 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212329576643 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539618298547 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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