Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this, and what are some solutions.
it is often argued by professional that in past time, old aged people were more living happily and healthy as compared to present times and now they are suffering from social isolation and many health problems. This essay shows that workaholic nature and generation gap are two leading causes of this phenomenon along with possible solutions.
The first and foremost reason of this trend is that these days, people have become workaholic and hardly have time for old ones. when the family members return to home after work then they are totally fatigued and have not enough energy. For example, as per the recent research 75% of individuals cannot give only 15 minute in day to old aged due to their busy schedule. The second vivid cause is the change in the eating patterns. In earlier time food used to be prepared and ate together by all family member where they shared their daily happening but now a days family member give preference to fast food restaurants which does not appeal to the eyes of senior citizens. For example, I used to share usually my dinner with my parents but my children occasionally take food with me
The first possible solution of this problem is that people need to make a balance between work and family life. For instance, small trips can be planned at the weekend with old ones so that they can remove their loneliness and do some activities outside which would be beneficial for their health. The second possible approach is that there should be awareness regarding the benefits of taking home made food instead of fast-food outlets with oldies. Kids should be allowed to take fast food only limited number of times by their parents because the habits that children develop in early age are difficult to change later in life. When the children turn to adulthood, they never like to take food with their parents and grandparents
In conclusion, changing eating patterns and work oriented nature are the main behind loneliness and health issued, faced by old people. These problems can be solved by spending some time with family such as planning small trip with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31971264396 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559556786704 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0600532824 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.461538462 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218442913455 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776550217436 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650136333755 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152095414389 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702479275239 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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