Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Playing with a variety of toys which were bought by the parents is every infants childhood recreation. Although it gives a lot of fun and helps to gain mental ability, there are some challenges like drifting away from the real world activities. In my opinion, having large number of toys helps the juvenile in all round development despite challenges like isolating them from other activities.

The main advantage of having a large collection of toys helps to acquire mental strength in a joyful way. It is also the best leisure activity for every child. For example, few toys like a bumble-bee makes children to think creatively in a funnier way. Moreover, Researchers found that children who play with diverse toys have a better growth compared to the children who does not participate in the games. These reasons make parents to encourage their kids and get them involved in different kinds of recreational activities.

The main challenge faced in this aspect is it isolates the child and makes them introverts. They live in a fantasy world and get addicted to them forgetting about what is happening around them. Few kids also sulk and does not listen to the parents, which makes it difficult for them to control. They even get distracted from the studies which leads to poor performance in academics. For instance, a child playing with toy car goes around and may hit any obstacles with may cause harm. So these issues should be addressed with the utmost care by every parent before allowing them to play outside.

In conclusion, Even though there are a few minor issues involved in playing with a large number of toys, if proper care taken by parents, I believe it has significant benefits which helps to gain mental and physical strength.</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'infants'' or 'infant's'?
Suggestion: infants'; infant's
...ich were bought by the parents is every infants childhood recreation. Although it gives...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a joyful way" with adverb for "joyful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...f toys helps to acquire mental strength in a joyful way. It is also the best leisure activity f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erent kinds of recreational activities. The main challenge faced in this aspect ...
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Line 13, column 82, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...w minor issues involved in playing with a large number of toys, if proper care taken by parents, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04148929827 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8882487873 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347465915768 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100309127198 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695177273577 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196939168393 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716205986212 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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