Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children are the tender buds of the society and how they should be raised, is a debatable issue. Although a group of people believes that it is good to send the children to childcare centers at their tender stage of life, other parents who are working full-time think that grandparents can do the best care of their grandchildren than any agency. I will discuss both sides of the arguments related to childcare and provide my opinion, how much of it is beneficial for the children if their family member will do their upbringing.

Admittedly, it could be advantageous to take the services offered by daycare centers. First and foremost, from the social growth perspective, kids get a chance to indulge with other children in many different activities, which inculcates the true values of life in them such as cooperation, team player, and self-confidence. Another significant argument in favor is that children could learn the behavioral and cognitive skills very easily at childcare offices as the faculty members who work there, are armed with oratory and explanatory skills. For instance, a teacher can teach etiquettes to children with real-life examples because they have the ability to create the situations on the fly.

In contrast, there are several compelling reasons why family members are the best option for the uprising of the children. Firstly, from the safety perspective, children will get more attention at their home from their family whereas, in daycare institutions, carers have to take care of many kids. Therefore, the more the attention, the less the chances of any mishap. Secondly, if the grandparents spend their quality time along with their grandchildren, then it will build the camaraderie among them. Moreover, grandparents will apprise their children about their ancestors and their sacrifices.

In my opinion, both the views have their own positive aspects, but, the upsides that family members such as grandparents’ upbringing offer to their kids have more advantages in terms of safety and inbound love with their children.

In conclusion, while children who join childcare will become more social and extrovert, but the safety of children and knowledge about the family history is more important, which children can only learn from their family members.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28337874659 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85474850964 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531335149864 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6716122304 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338357595882 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113630115517 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746185616945 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188633759678 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794871486452 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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