Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although it is thought by some parents that infant care centres offer an excellent facilities for young kids, other believe that family relatives namely grand dad and grand mum, can take care children in a better way. In my opinion, I consider that grandparents, who nurture kids with love and care, are very important part of children's life and their learning in future life.

On the one hand, some people think that daycare provides various better services for pre- school kids that is beneficial for their future learning and development. In other words, learning in groups of childcare centres, which helps in early education, motivates young children to perform better in their future school life. For example, young kids, who attend childcare centres get nursery education in their early age, often feel confidence and get familiar of similar school environments. Furthermore, different types of fun play activities such as art and craft, building blocks, solving puzzles and other physical activities, in infant care centres help children in their physical and mental development.

On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better to keep kids with their grandparents in early life is vital for their proper care, learning family values and social morals and I agree. For instance, family members take care young ones with lot of affection and teaching kids basic moral of life such as ethical behaviour, respect for everyone, social values and other essential qualities that require to be a responsible person in their adulthood. Moreover, taking care of little ones by grandparents avoid any kind of financial burden on parents because it doesn't require any payment towards childcare.

In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that it is imperative for kids to learn moral values of life as a human being before any basic education and family members can fulfil this responsibility efficiently.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
... infant care centres offer an excellent facilities for young kids, other believe that fami...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... financial burden on parents because it doesnt require any payment towards childcare. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21086261981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63102872656 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527156549521 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5859522846 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.1 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339287328825 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140423662012 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649134240096 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202529364619 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527475547959 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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