Some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
some parents argue that children must have mobile phones for themselves, because, others believe it is unnecessary for teenagers. This essay will discuss that, cellphones are not a necessity for children and parents should only give it to them, once they start college or university.
On the one hand, mobile phones help in staying in touch with a child, because these days even a child have a hectic schedule, which includes going to school, coaching classes, and extra-curricular activity classes. A cellphone helps in staying in touch with them and they can reach out to their parents in case of an emergency. Moreover, a smart phone can be loaded with software such as iTracker to track locations, it can be used to track a child's location and whether they are at the right place or they lied to their parents to party with friends.
On the other hand, access to a smartphone makes children indulge in fruitless activities. they may spend more than the desired time playing games and watching movies, resulting in poor grades at school. Additionally, excess use of smartphone cause serious health issues in adolescents, such as poor eye-sight and decreased cognitive ability. For instance, a survey conducted by a university stated, a teenager spends an average of 3-4 hours daily playing games and social media surfing. Consequently, hampering studies and grades.
To conclude, mobile phones are necessary these days and some people feel their children must have access to their personal phones. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages and parents must avoid it until their child reaches college or university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, may, moreover, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22932330827 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74317617852 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.649103838 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213534178872 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755108471626 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770857137841 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140222953946 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918515060213 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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