Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
The habit of buying new gadgets is a widespread phenomenon in today's world. On one hand, some people believe that it is a negative habit, while on the other hand, others argued that the advantages of such activities overweight the disadvantages, I tend to agree with the latter opinion for two reasons.
First and foremost, the habit of buying cutting edge gadgets can help individuals to be up to date with new technologies, which comes with a myriad of facilities that obviously improve our lives and make it easier. Moreover, these devices usually runs new updated softwares, hence might help its owner a great deal with his/her professional work, the latest Apple pad, for instance, has a highly sensitive screen that facilitates artists work to create digital arts, its camera also is professional and can help photographers to shot photos and edit them with few clicks.
Additionally, it can give impression of modesty, which results in self-satisfaction. if you buy a new iPhone, for example, you will probably have a feeling of happiness as you own the smartest and the most compact device, which not only contains applications for entertainment, it also acts as an electronic friend that helps you manage your daily activities. However, if this habit consequently turned to be a buying addiction, then its negativity will overweight it's positive effect.
In conclusion, the obsession of buying a-state-of-the-art devices can have both psychological and technological benefits, only if controlled properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3347107438 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19291827896 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3359184549 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.375 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.625 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117293626154 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512385848229 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309376932962 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682013283351 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335721717212 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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