Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
With the evolution of technology, most of the people frequently upgrade their gadget collection. People are particularly fascinated by the latest phones and laptops that are available in the market. According to me, purchasing advanced gadgets is beneficial and this essay will discuss the curiosity among people to explore new features and the improved security in modern devices.
To begin with, smartphone and laptop companies have introduced various advanced features in their latest models. Technophiles are captivated by these features which they would like to explore and make use of. Therefore, they prefer to purchase advanced models either for their personal use or business purposes. For example, every year, the Chinese based manufacturer RedMI is releasing new smartphones with improved touch screen and high camera quality which are attracting the users. For this reason, techies are interested to exchange their old gadgets with the latest ones.
Furthermore, the upgraded models come up with high-security features. More specifically, while using email, social media and banking applications in smartphones and laptops, securing the content is the important measure to be taken by the user. This is why buyers are tempted to acquire new devices that have improved security attributes as it helps them to safeguard their data from being hacked. To exemplify, for safe authentication, the Apple Inc., had introduced fingerprint, face detection and Iris features which were later brought up by their successors. Seen in this light, it is a great idea to have revamped gadgets.
To conclude, obtaining new smartphones and laptops are extremely useful for people to upgrade themselves with technological advancements by making use of the latest features and also to protect their data with multilevel authentications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62007168459 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95193877373 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.917882044 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101300041278 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386472503931 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389865419004 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715562389147 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393924272312 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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