Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist.
To what extent do you agree?
These days, it is commonly observed that people in the areas of engineering and technology are being highly encouraged and honored than those in the field of music and art. This essay completely agrees with this statement and explains how engineers and scientists are being recognized for their inventions and why arts and culture seem to be less progressive.
Firstly, it is evident that technology has been a great success throughout the world. The latest findings deliberately in the fields of technology, medicine, astronomy and ocean sciences are highly effective for improvisation of the society and meet the needs of the people. Therefore, these inventors deserve to be honored for the efficiency and their hard work for the development of a country. For instance, the inventions such as electricity, computers, phones and vehicles serve people extensively in their day-to-day life making their life easier.
Secondly, the cultural activities such as music and art are just a passion for some people rather than a profession. People in these fields such as celebrities, musicians, dancers and painters can only perform or entertain the visitors and viewers but the donation to the society is comparatively less. Besides, not all the countries in the world give much prominence to music and art and hence they are not being recognized by the nations. To exemplify, the popularity for culture and arts is relatively high in India when compared to other western countries.
To conclude, it is clear that the value of a person is determined by the hard work and not for the passion. Therefore, great people are being respected for their contribution to the community whereas the musicians and artists are popular only in certain countries but not in all.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18531468531 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88090034136 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9806930477 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131458711611 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482016050137 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391664345897 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878144034778 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485217804552 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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