Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree?
In the present day world, medical research is highly expensive and some people suggest that taking precautions is better than undergoing treatment. This essay partially agrees with this opinion because it is impossible to prevent all the diseases and hence research is mandatory. Firstly, this essay will discuss why preventive measures don’t work in some areas and secondly, it will explain why research is necessary.
To begin with, there are many unidentified diseases spreading all over the world these days. Certain communities in under developed countries are still consuming food and water under unhygienic conditions. For those who are still suffering from poverty, it is difficult to afford for healthy intake and costly treatments and hence spreading of illness in such areas is unsustainable. The best examples are the recent ebola outbreak in Africa which spread all over the world and if they had proper treatment it would have saved plenty of lives.
Furthermore, it is essential to diagnose certain deadly diseases before it gets contracted from person to person. Although, the research involves deliberately high budget and it’s a cumbersome process to find the sources of these diseases. Besides, treatments can save plenty of lives and the research helps to recognize and prevent the unidentified diseases. The scientists of WHO recently invented laser treatments to kill the cancer causing bacteria in the human body and hence this deadly disease can now be diagnosed and cured with ease.
To conclude, it is clear that precautions do not help to keep away human beings from diseases. It is however necessary to go ahead with the research to invent the causes and treatments for harmful illness because it is beneficial as far as the future prospect is concerned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29965156794 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7509499672 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7502424037 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163422563562 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534033703667 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392027679287 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912784645529 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516926293323 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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