Some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
News fastens an individual through the globe with the thread of broadcasting the activities happening over there. That is why, certain mortals prefer overseas bulletins while further are confined with nationwide news only. I will discuss both the aspects and will present my viewpoint after critiquing them.
Having a glance over the broadened interest of people over the worldwide news, so perceptible heights have the electronic journalism approached nowadays that colossally dispersed world has shrunk into a global village. This advent has proved as a godsend for the peoples who’s beloved ones or relatives are residing far away from them. For an instance, a recent mash up of college students in one of Canada’s college is broadcasted through social media worldwide facilitating concerned parents to monitor their ward’s mischief through international news. Moving to next, international news telecast is supposed to be a real of cup of tea for overseas entrepreneurs because they can smoothly surveil the international trade markets, stock exchange etcetera .Furthermore, several travel guide news, weather ministration telecasts or explorations shows of specific nations or destinations are frequently and closely monitored by globetrotters as these help stem them to choose the appropriate time and conditions of journey.
On the flip side of the coin, some people limit themselves up to their native periphery and are least interested in any world level movement. Illustrating this, rarely are the people living in certain Indian remote areas knowing about 9/11 incident of America. Moreover, talking specifically about my own nation as India is an agricultural governing country and lion’s share of people are from farmer background. Therefore, not only are they stringently considerate for their domestic agriculture related and husbandry activities like climate conditions monitoring ,but also seeking for any municipality governmental assistance in cultivation.
Recapitulating above discussion, although local news are territory definitive and related on goings, but to meet the pace of swiftly swelling era, one ought to be intensify himself/herself up to globalised level through international news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79393939394 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17208323179 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7979904051 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232595006839 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741933561755 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380106302054 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129668638162 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307185240149 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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