Sports have turned into a business as more and more companies are getting involved with sporting events. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Commercialization of sports is growing periodically with indulgence of corporative bodies in sporting events. In my opinion this interference shares the monetary burden of governing sports department, so I will demonstrate this exercise as sports burgeoning trend.
First of all, so exorbitant have become the sporting events that they demand appropriate training sessions, experienced coaches, specialized equipments and many other hidden expenses. Therefore, financial and impedimental sponsorships from business firms as a exchange of their company’s branding fulfills the requirement of each others’. For example, in last cricket world cup a renowned mobile company Oppo sponsored Indian team with their wardrobe kits and in return printed their name onto their jerseys’. Secondly, not only do charismatic endorsement assignments, but also lucrative rewards are awarded by corporative agencies to the best performers influencing other players to perform well and to grab these honors.
In addition to this, organizing frequent and independent championships and contests by corporative organizations help-stem talented contenders to explore themselves. Illustrating this, a lubricant oil company Castrol schedules a football tournament every year for youngsters named as Football Talent Hunt and winner team of this tournament got a chance to compete directly in national level competition. Furthermore, there is also a prevalent trend of sports players’ brand ambassadorship assisting them with extra earning.
In conclusion, myriads of requisites should be there to broaden a sport and indulgence of business organizations in sporting events would be proved as a relaxing breathe for sporting events providing rudimentary facilitations in terms of sponsorships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11507936508 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4540134801 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.144408676 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190543878583 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076557057496 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645234483608 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120916786836 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537940387262 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.51 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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