Few might advise that having a higher qualification such as masters or Ph.D. would be helpful in getting a good paycheck and other portions of humans say that skillful experience is the key to achieve success in career. The initial statement has more value because higher studies can help to gain leadership roles.
Firstly, if we look into the industry standards a Ph.D. degree or doctorate has more value than any bachelor’s degree. It will not only help to get a job but also benefit from getting well-played jobs. Because experimental learning is a part of the course curriculum in university studies. For example, students from top universities receive job offers from fortune companies while they are still in college. Apart from this, all the high powered jobs such as managing directors or C level jobs would require a good qualification and having a highly qualified degree, would be the key to have the first foot in the door.
On the other hand, it is an unarguable fact that subject matter experts and skilled professionals have been receiving good income because they are in the industry for quite some time. Especially niche industries such as IT and automobile industries look for more and more practical experience rather a knowledge which is coming from studies. Although they might receive good pay it will take years of hard work to draw the attention. Apart from this, it doesn’t matter how much of experience once have they will never fit into the shoes of either a doctor or a lawyer.
Both highly qualified and skillful experience can help to gain a good paycheck. However, qualification is the key to achieve it in a timely manner. This will help in getting a well-paying job as well as high powered jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: Little might
Few might advise that having a higher qualificati...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... benefit from getting well-played jobs. Because experimental learning is a part of the ...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...knowledge which is coming from studies. Although they might receive good pay it will tak...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... qualification is the key to achieve it in a timely manner. This will help in getting a well-payin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91554054054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74345750395 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5774492021 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21475988264 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770796723992 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828226465109 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1423606911 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744388363757 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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