Some people become famous when they are young. This is a good or a bad thing?
Being prominent during the youth has various ramifications. Many believe this can bring positive impacts to both individual and society. However, others contradict this belief. In this essay both positive and negative effects of being popular at an early age will be analyzed before a conclusion will be reached.
On the one hand, undeniably, being recognised by peers can bring many individual positive consequences for prominent persons. These can be easily seen in their behavior as they experience an alternative view of life, they have different perceptions, leading to becoming more mature than their counterparts. Meanwhile, socializing and making friends is easier for them due to their self-esteem they have gained through their positions. Besides, being famous at an early age can bring constructive impact on society as well. Children and teenagers follow these people and imitate their behaviors which can be a positive trend in some circumstances. For instants, they join to non-profit communities or help financially to charities. Thus, being famous has positive impacts not only on the prominent person but also on society as a whole.
On the contrary, the picture has a dark side. Children are not mature enough to perceive these loads of attention and money. This can consequently lead to be arrogant, self-considered and snobbish, causing to commit a crime, or do unacceptable and detrimental activities such as abusing drugs, gambling, or sexual matters. These daunting consequences are probable for both famous person and their followers.
To sum up, from my point of view, becoming well-known at an early age is neither a boon, nor a bane, and this issue differs completely from one person to another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'committing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: committing
..., self-considered and snobbish, causing to commit a crime, or do unacceptable and detrime...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, while, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97789644344 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9318929047 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125611165558 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413039284803 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292535254452 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708728913564 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255684418994 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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