It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
The question of whether some children are highly gifted in some field, or all of them are intrinsically ready to learn, is a debating issue. Also, many argue that children all have a potential of being a good sports man or musician if they are well trained. This essay will discuss both attitudes before a conclusion has revealed.
The fact that gifted person can pass down their talent on their genes to their posterities is deniable. According to this fact, many people believe that some children born with specific talent, or they have a tendency to a particular field which their ancestors have. As we can clearly see, the children of prominent musician are highly gifted in playing a music which their parents play.
On the other hand, many cited that all children have a great potential of learning without a distinctive family history. A very good training to children can boost their talent. Thus, it is understandable why many musician or sports man compel their practice while they are children. Messi who is a prominent footballer started his training from his early age, and he is not genetically a footballer. As a consequence, children can become a good musician or sports man if they train early.
I personally believe that although all children are highly potential to acquire every new science or train promptly, it is crucial to pay attention which field they are more gifted in order to insist on that one. This is transparent why these days children are examined to be distinguished which field they are better in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether some children are highly gifted in some...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun musician seems to be countable; consider using: 'many musicians'.
Suggestion: many musicians
... talent. Thus, it is understandable why many musician or sports man compel their practice whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65431603715 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9247152088 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157816467751 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661415785859 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453696176944 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099671899972 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290541093839 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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