Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates find better jobs while some other hold that there are wider benefits for individual and society. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
There is high discussion over the verdict that whether universities to support to provide jobs to students or merely education is their responsibility. However before going to any conclusion both the views are being discussed with due reasons and my views are also being later on discussed.
To contrast on former views, Universities have responsibilities that besides education , they restorative the students to capable for earning for life living. Indeed , now-a- days in the every field neck-cut competition for getting jobs and in such condition if a student does not get job ,than he/she feel s frustrated and nervous. Moreover ,developing country like Indian where employment is the greatest concern for government and if universities comes ahead , than government can do their job more efficiently.
On the second side views, another cluster of people thinks that university has prior responsibility to impart quality education, and to teach the subjects which are beneficial to society . Moreover, they think that divert their view from quality education to job oriented mind , quality education might be not given . And also ,good education fulfil students curiosity and initially they have to struggle but can do better in their liking field , for instance good business, and to do higher education.
However, I would prefer the former views to vindicate the university’s stand in searching jobs ,because ,most student come from middle class or below middle class and they have to do much in their life and earn good ,but some time due to unavailability of industrial skills they have to struggle to get a good job which can be eased by universities .
By sum up all the discussion points , it can be concluded that universities can do some session which may help student to get jobs and they can give industrial training during in academia and these all thing they can do in last semester or some project subjects and by this way actual subjects will also get taught to student.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249299719888 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.159663865546 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868347338936 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560224089636 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0420168067227 0.0437548338989 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103641456583 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0392156862745 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89412416414 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0532212885154 0.0326793684256 163% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0644257703081 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.03081232493 0.021408717616 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140056022409 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2035.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09281437126 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341317365269 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260479041916 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188622754491 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125748502994 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89412416414 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 60.0188251136 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 33.4 20.7743622355 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7111772093 49.517814964 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.5 127.492653851 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.7743622355 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 55.0 3.99599198397 1376% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.4479041916 49.1944974215 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.52173913043 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306495812635 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147416874 0.102741220458 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108422634722 0.0668466124924 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.680769698335 0.534860350844 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168205040203 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144144063724 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498086541022 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311053248624 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0685904050108 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191935167511 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390771290689 0.058150111329 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.