Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates find better jobs while some other hold that there are wider benefits for individual and society. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
Higher education plays a pivotal role towards an individual's professional life. many people are of the opinion that the role of university education is to merely facilitate a graduate's job hunting endeavours. others believe that besides this, the beneficial ramifications a university can provide for its students are many.
Firstly, it is obvious that the primal objective of any university is to award a successful candidate with a professional degree. Although a degree may not guarantee a job, it is, nevertheless necessary to have one, as employers would not want to hire an individual without the right kind of qualifications. Hence, if a university is able to increase job prospects of its graduates, people are naturally inclined to believe that this is the only task a university is supposed to fulfil.
On the other hand, many believe that a degree is just one of the many advantages a university can offer. such as professional character development; the importance of which moves in tandem with that of a mere degree. Of course, both are important, but without the former, a graduate may not be able to earn a place for himself in a professional setting. The main reason the supports this claim is that employers seek not only the right qualifications of a potential employee but also how well he or she can adapt to the work environment of that particular firm.
Having analysed both views, it seems that besides helping the graduates to find better jobs, a university can do much more than that, such as instilling professional attitudes in the graduates that can facilitate not only their job prospects but also make them contribute towards the welfare of the overall society. it is expected that the developing universities give the aforementioned advantages equal weight to that of a merely helping to improve job prospects for graduates.
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...rds the welfare of the overall society. it is expected that the developing univers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, kind of, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09446254072 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08331955678 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9381046488 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237357042639 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852172873506 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05943437312 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149733704111 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587663224968 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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