Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Although many people think that natural talent is the most crucial element to succeed in a particular sport, I would argue that practice and constant exercise are the key factors to excel.
Those who believe that an individual’s natural ability is the number one factor which can make you a winner, hold this view for several reasons. First of all, being naturally keen and eligible to engage in a specific sport is essential in order to facilitate an individual’s practice. For instant, only those who have a natural talent can easily and quickly achieve great results. Furthermore, a person who does not have a genuine interest and who is not incline toward a particular sport cannot secure feasible and achievable goals. These individuals might struggle to succeed and therefore they will experience feelings of frustration and demotivation.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that high motivation and frequent practice are more important elements. To begin with, being highly motivated and exercising constantly are pivotal factors which can bring great results even although an individual does not possess a natural talent. For example, a girl I know who was not capable of playing tennis, after having attended several lessons clearly demonstrated an improvement. In addition to this, working hard and making efforts are always required to improve and enhance an individual’s abilities. This means that, although a person might not be good in a sport at first, working on their exercise and technique can greatly make the difference and enable them to reach a high level.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that natural talent is a beneficial factor to excel in a sport, however determination, perseverance and practice are the essential and crucial elements which can guarantee an individual’s success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34602076125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0849259696 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6706303224 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222656956847 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792196419821 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563272494749 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135146171811 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00945421764635 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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