Some people believe that to be successful at sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In these days and ages, the issue of whether the accomplishment of an athlete has associated with their innate capability or is a result of their hard work out has become a hot debate among people. While natural talent plays an essential role in sports persons’ life, I would argue that other factors such as hard work and practice are equally important.
On the one hand, the supporters of inherent ability put forward some compelling reasons to justify their point of view. In point of fact, the athletes who are benefiting from the flair and ability which are adequate for a certain sport are more likely to become successful. Therefore, in this situation they are more encouraged to do exercises without need to work hard so as to exhibit one’s skills. Indeed, most of the famous athletes have shown remarkable progress and achievements from an early age. One good illustration of this is the professional soccer football in the world, Lionel Messi, as one of the greatest players of all time and his talent were soon apparent. Notwithstanding the fact that he was diagnosed with a growth hormone deficiency as a child, but now he has become an amazing soccer player.
One the other hand, the opponents assert that hard work has formed an integral part of every athlete’s life. Thus, from their point of view, over practicing overrides the importance of innate flair and is a decisive factor in everyone’s accomplishment. They argue that if one be a diligent and hardworking person, without a doubt they will attain their contribution of professional life. Ronaldo as opposed to Messi, for example, has a moderate level of talent in football. But, he always compels itself to exercise for long hours, and in turn, as a result of his persistent effort, he is an unbeatable star in the world of football.
To sum up, according mentioned above, both natural ability and work out are necessary for sportsperson’ successful and none of them alone is enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO
Message: Use simply 'to'
... do exercises without need to work hard so as to exhibit one's skills. Indeed, most...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897897898 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94489731025 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2453716635 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143381551116 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494669922072 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467392417147 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970018040887 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251124205737 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.