Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hussein1987's picture

There are a enurmous number of people think that driving safty begins from legal age point for thos people who completed 18 years old or above. I completely disagree with them, because driving can be counted as a talent. In addition, there are certain conditions that driving license might be granted for some people who did not turn the legal age due to disabilities of ones father or mother in case if the family have one child in the age of 17 years. furthermore, he/she must apply for driving permssion.

However, we can not deny that driving is talent and ethics alike. It does not mean the legal age will not commit accidents. Although, if someone is familiar with roads' signs and rules structure, undoubtedly will not cause mess in driving road procedure. For example, Jack who is student at unviverstiy of Stanford, he is a member of family that does not have brothers and sisters except him. His father had physical disabilities which he can not drive at all, notable his mother's age is over 87 years with impaired vision. He relocate them wherever they want. So he is smart enough and cautious person while driving, whereas no accidents have been registered in his case so far. Maintaining road safety depends on people and how they drive.
Knowing, being famialarized with road knowledge will invevitably avoid any accidents which it may happen. Furhtermore, more practice of driving will consolidate ones self confidence.

To sum up, driving is talent and ethics, and your presence of mind. consequently, driving will help you to prevent accidents from happening.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'relocates'.
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... over 87 years with impaired vision. He relocate them wherever they want. So he is smart...
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Suggestion: Consequently
... and ethics, and your presence of mind. consequently, driving will help you to prevent accid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95864661654 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62077535319 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7895369694 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201707681094 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674540677997 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05097986274 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113332618614 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620281323441 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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