Some people believe that children are given too much time. They feel that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. How do you think children should spent their free time?
some say that children have too much leisure time after school and they should spend this time on more studying. I strongly believe that children should use their free time to do outdoor activities rather than schoolwork because they need to improve their physical strength for a better academic performance and they will not be very effective for studying during this time either.
children’s energy will be significantly enhanced when they engage in physical activities after school. In other words, outdoor activities, such as camping and playing football, will make children more refreshed to study academic subjects effectively. For example, a study of the National University of Education in Ho Chi Minh City showed that 60 percent of children in elementary schools performed better in final examinations after they participated in football competitions at weekends.
Another reason why children should not use free time to do more schoolwork is that they will not be able to learn in an effective way. when children know that they have their own time to play, their brains will not allow them to focus on any academic lessons. Hence, the effort to force children to study after school is completely useless and it may even cause stress to them. For instance, research from the UCLA indicates that children’s brains tend to resist any academic knowledge on the weekends. In contrast, children react more positively when they are informed to participate in some fun activities with their peers.
In conclusion, children should allocate all their leisure time to engage in outdoor activities as they will gain more energy and physical strength for their study at school and free time is proved to be the most ineffective time for children to do schoolwork.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20209059233 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7602373135 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.586592313 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.727272727 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455749423683 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20017717608 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154805030003 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340782536407 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154956260488 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.