Some people believe that the death penalty can reduce crimes.
Do you agree or disagree?
The argument, over whether capital punishment aids in restricting the crime rate or not, has not been settled yet. I completely agree with this notion not only because it saves society from those offenders who have completed their sentences, and terminate convict’s network with the outer world, but also gives a moral lesson to others. This essay will explore how these factors justify the death sentence as a way to control crime.
Firstly, some offenders commit crimes after completing their sentences due to which the crime rate remains stagnant. This is to say, ex-convicts are unable to secure a better place in the society after leaving jail, and often get back to their criminal world because of the lack of effective rehabilitation system. If the death penalty were common, it would help to overcome the crime rate. Take an example of Abu Ramal, a Yemen rebel, who was the sole reason for igniting a civil war in the country after getting exonerated by the government. Thus, hanging to death is one a measure to control offences.
Secondly, terrorists have a strong communication network with their gang, even from behind the bars. As some corrupt officials allow incarcerated criminals to operate their network from jail. For example, in Afghanistan, the country head of Al-Qaida was involved in orchestrating many terrorist activities in Kabul from jail. Hence, sentencing these prisoners a capital punishment helps in breaking the connection between criminals which ultimately reduces the crime rate.
Finally, in order to curb the crime rate, capital punishment can be used as a tool to give a lesson to others to refrain themselves from such activities and abide by the law. Therefore, the fear of death in public is a must to control crime.
To sum up, people may vary in their opinions; however, I agree that the death penalty is fully justified in terms of decreasing the crime rate by giving a moral lesson to the public, control re-offending and breaking the criminal network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1419939577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71096823379 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2732182777 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104513594346 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383110576767 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037640127923 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649758511714 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332813653265 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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